Monday, July 25, 2011

SUCCINCTLY YOURS


In response to Grandma Goulash's weekly micro-fiction challenge, I submit:

I used to hate this shed where he came to drink while he worked the wood. Now he was gone and I’d become as he had been.

5 comments:

Pat said...

Ooh, sad and poignant. I like your take on this week's photo!

Grandma's Goulash said...

You've packed a big story into your microfiction and made a statement about the hereditary component of alcoholism as well. That's impressive for so few characters.

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

Nice microfiction! Kind of sad, but I guess since he knows he's making the same mistakes, perhaps he'll correct them. :) Nice to see your name on the Linky.

Kay L. Davies said...

Ooh, that can happen, too. So sad when it does. Good take on the prompt, Sue.

—Kay, Alberta, Canada

Helen said...

That's a very sad story....